Comm 131: Public Speaking; Corrections To Make For My Final Draft Speech Preparation Outline

Leon,

Good topic choice and start to your outline.  Here is my feedback:

-Why is your specific purpose cited?  Is that not your idea?

-You need to rewrite your Central Idea and ensure it encapsulates your three main points in a clear and concise manner.

-Be sure not to get into subpoints in your main point statements.

-Watch the typos.

-Review APA formatting for your bibliography.

Please let me know if you have any questions. 20/25 (My score on the Speech Preparation Outline The State Of Having A Good Physical Mental Health)

• Due Date (Double Check): 06/11/2018
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• Supporting Documents: Leon Shirima; Professor Sarah Parker Hughes; COMM 131; Speech Preparation Outline; The State Of Having A Good Physical Mental Health