Leon,
Good topic choice and start to your outline. Here is my feedback:
-Why is your specific purpose cited? Is that not your idea?
-You need to rewrite your Central Idea and ensure it encapsulates your three main points in a clear and concise manner.
-Be sure not to get into subpoints in your main point statements.
-Watch the typos.
-Review APA formatting for your bibliography.
Please let me know if you have any questions. 20/25 (My score on the Speech Preparation Outline The State Of Having A Good Physical Mental Health)